yinren 发表于 2013-1-8 17:10   全显示 1楼
这篇文章写得非常好。心理描写细腻，肉戏也足，看过好几遍了，每次都忍不住要射出来。
美中不足的就是感觉后面的一个情节没设计好，如果把小静到杭州被设计强奸的人物换成给她拍人体照片的王导感觉效果会更好，甚至可以让王导加入到以后的群交中去。
文章只写到了婚礼部分，期待能有后续
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